a prose piece
I'm so glad the creative flow hasn't dried up. Always remain resilient.
Onward, onward!
No words, I just loved this, it comforted me and awakened my sleepy brain. Wonderful, I want to read it again.
I liked some of the metaphors you used—waves nailed to the sand, for example—and the overall tempo you developed.
🫀:,)
“The waves nail themselves to the sand. “
Love it ! Keep bringing that emotional violence to the core. Also note how Baldwin (nice to see what yr reading) ties the beauty of poetry and prose together with narrative. Narrative hibbert!
Great piece, all power to your pen.
(Charlie)
the narrative ran away with the spoon.
I'm so glad the creative flow hasn't dried up. Always remain resilient.
Onward, onward!
No words, I just loved this, it comforted me and awakened my sleepy brain. Wonderful, I want to read it again.
I liked some of the metaphors you used—waves nailed to the sand, for example—and the overall tempo you developed.
🫀:,)
“The waves nail themselves to the sand. “
Love it ! Keep bringing that emotional violence to the core. Also note how Baldwin (nice to see what yr reading) ties the beauty of poetry and prose together with narrative. Narrative hibbert!
Great piece, all power to your pen.
(Charlie)
the narrative ran away with the spoon.